Đọc và sửa cấu trúc, ngữ pháp giúp mình ( có thể bổ sung thêm để đoạn văn của mình được hay hơn :(( ) Đề: Children in the past and now I think the live of children today are very different from the lives of children in the past. Firstly, children in the past go to school on foot however, children in now go to school by many means. For example, they go to school by bikes , electric bikes and so on. Secondly, in the past chidlren enjoy themselves by they play tug of war, hide and seek, fly kites and on so on for fun, but now children play computer games, watch film, and listen to music. Finnaly, in the past, children study at home village or hometown, but now children study in other towns or abroad. In conclusion,c hildren's life today is much better than in the past. Sửa giúp mình với :