Mình không theo dàn ý của bạn nhó. ^^ Bạn lấy bài mình tách ra làm khung rồi cho những ý của bạn vào.

Today, education is increasingly concerned, because education is to raise children, who later will become the backbone of the country. So I find education very important. Since ancient times, our country is still poor and the number of illiterate people accounts for 95% of the total population of Vietnam, which is why the selection of talented people is very difficult. And more and more, learning is more focused, because only study can have a good future. Moreover, when going to school, students can learn about life issues around us, learn good things about life. Going to school, students can make friends and get to know many people. I hope the government will put more emphasis on learning.