Air pollution is the contamination of the atmosphere. Air pollution is caused by many reasons, some of these reasons are smoke from the factories, vehicles wasting fuel in the atmosphere, people cutting down forests , the ( bỏ the )  farmers using too much pesticide, herbicide, ... Air pollution is very dangerous, and can cause serious effects for humans, animals, and plants. If the pollution of the air happens, more people will have breathing problems, acid rain will happen and destroy the buildings, the animals and plants will die... The above problems are more serious, so we need to have the( bỏ the ) solutions to these problems . We need to care more about the environment, don't cut down the forest, use the( bỏ the ) public vehicles more, and schools need to teach children about protecting the environment, ... In conclusion , we have to protect the environment to protect our life ( giữ nguyên hoặc thay bằng lives cũng được )

Những chỗ nào mình bôi đen và gạch chân là những chỗ được sửa . Mong bạn cho mình hay nhất vì để tìm ra lỗi ngữ pháp đâu phải dễ dàng

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Air pollution is the contamination of the atmosphere. Air pollution is caused by many reasons. Some of these reasons are smoke from factories, vehicles wasting fuel in the atmosphere, people cutting down forests, farmers using too much pesticide, herbicide,... Air pollution is very dangerous and can cause serious effects for humans, animals, and plants. If the pollution of the air happens, more people will have breathing problems, acid rain will happen and destroy the buildings, the animals and plants will die, etc. The above problems are more serious, so we need to have solutions to these problems. We need to care more about the environment, don't cut down the forest, use public vehicles more, and schools need to teach children about protecting the environment. In conclusion, we have to protect the environment to protect our lives.