Bài làm: 

    There is no denying that there are many disadvantages about the viewpoint that women who have got married have a job and having children. Firstly, the females who are having children now will have much more works to do. As a result, a myriad of drawbacks will affect to them are the depressure, tiredness so they cannot have any power to do any kinds of jobs. Secondly, it might not be refused that women's life is even harder than men. They have to do a variety of houseworks such as cleaning, washing dishes and clothes, doing housecleaning, ect. Meanwhile, the percentage of men who just care about their business more than their families is an enormous number, this lead to the fact that females would get more works if they have their own career.

Một số từ vựng: (để bn bt thêm)

disadvantages = drawbacks: bất lợi

viewpoint: quan điểm

refuse = deny: phủ nhận

a variety of = a myriad of = many

meanwhile = while: trong khi

women who have got married: phụ nữ đã cưới (ý là người mẹ

Thông cảm bài này mik ko có Finally, vì thêm vào thì hơi khó để nói và trình bày ;-;

Chúc bạn học tốt!!!